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Edits to the text, draft for now as we update on the go

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@64ix 64ix changed the title Copy review from Matthieu feat: Copy review from Matthieu Sep 2, 2025
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64ix commented Sep 5, 2025

This pull request focuses on improving clarity, accuracy, and consistency across the documentation and vocabulary for iExec's privacy and confidential computing offerings. The changes include terminology updates, corrections, expanded explanations for key concepts, and the addition of new technical terms. Below are the most important changes grouped by theme:

Documentation & Terminology Improvements

  • Updated references from "Turnkey Privacy" to "Privacy Toolkit" or "Privacy tools" across multiple files for consistent branding and clearer messaging. [1] [2] [3] [4] [5]
  • Enhanced and clarified the explanation of iApps, Protected Data, and RLC Token, including why they matter and how they work. This includes restructuring the iApp overview, expanding on confidential AI, and refining payment flow and tokenomics explanations. [1] [2] [3] [4] [5] [6] [7] [8]
  • Improved the introduction and welcome content to better communicate the value proposition and support available to builders, including details about the toolkit, support, and grants. [1] [2]

Technical Vocabulary & Style

  • Added several technical acronyms and terms (e.g., RLC, API, dApp, iApp, IPFS, TEE, SGX, TDX, MCP) to the accepted vocabulary, and corrected a typo in "cryptocurrency." [1] [2]
  • Updated .vale.ini configuration to disable Google Acronyms for Markdown files, allowing for broader use of technical acronyms in documentation.

Content & Navigation Updates

  • Refined sidebar and navigation labels for clarity, such as renaming "iApp" to "Privacy iApp."
  • Added a new section on "iExec Confidential AI," outlining the confidential AI pipeline and its benefits, and fixed asset references for use-case cards. [1] [2] [3]

General Corrections & Minor Improvements

  • Fixed minor typos, improved sentence structure, and clarified instructions throughout various Markdown files. [1] [2] [3]
  • Removed outdated or redundant TODO items from the README.md.

These changes collectively enhance the developer experience, improve documentation reliability, and ensure the terminology is up-to-date and consistent across the project.

@64ix 64ix marked this pull request as ready for review September 5, 2025 09:55
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LGTM

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  • Pas de "s" au abréviations (⚠️ iApps => iApp)

@64ix 64ix merged commit 049f806 into main Sep 8, 2025
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